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WereingterrorContemplative

How again today our patron star whose ancient vista is the long view

turns its wide brightness now and here: Below, we loll outdoors, sing & make fire.

We build no henge but after our swim, linger

by the pond. Dapples flicker pine trunks by the water.

Buzz & hum & wing & song combine. Light builds a monument to its passing.

Frogs content themselves in bullish chirps, hoopskirt blossoms

on thimbleberries fall, peeper toads hop, lazy—

Apex. The throaty world sings ripen.

Our grove slips past the sun's long kiss.

We dress. We head home in other starlight.

Our earthly time is sweetening from this.

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Wereingterror's poem follows a group spending a long, warm day outdoors. The "patron star" is the sun, and the speaker sees it as an ancient presence looking down on people who swim, sing, and build a fire. They don't raise a stone circle like a henge, but the poem hints that their quiet gathering has its own kind of ceremony. Light through the pines, the buzzing insects, the chirping frogs, and the falling blossoms fill the middle with sound and motion.

Then comes "Apex," the peak of the day and perhaps of the season. After that the group dresses and heads home "in other starlight," meaning the night has arrived. The mood is relaxed, sensuous, and quietly grateful. The speaker doesn't treat the afternoon as something to hold onto but as something that changes what follows. The last line, "Our earthly time is sweetening from this," suggests that a simple day in nature leaves life richer, like fruit ripening.

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