(once there was a boy who) — Summary

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Once there was a boy; Who couldn't lie, But manipulate.

Indoors he put up stars, While outdoors he was late. He hung out with introverts at bars; Extroverts? He made them wait

Changed he masks, Before anyone asks, With effortlessness of a juggler.

As casual guy he Got his way, oh glee! He dressed up to fulfil, A hole he couldn't even feel

Out of way he kept all spite Hid at home away from light

Gone was summer, down came fall No furs for him No furs at all

Winter cascaded; I concluded

Maybe he wasn't a bad guy after all? Indeed,

Once there was a boy; Who couldn't die, But navigate.

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The poem sketches a boy who never lies outright but bends situations to suit himself. He slips between social groups, from quiet introverts to loud extroverts, changing his "mask" as easily as a juggler tosses balls. Behind all this charm sits an emptiness: he dresses up to fill "a hole he couldn't even feel."

The seasons give the middle of the poem a chill. Summer leaves, fall arrives, and the boy has "no furs at all," which suggests he has nothing to protect him once the performance stops working. Then the speaker steps in, almost surprised, and wonders whether he was a bad guy after all. The mood is wry and light on the surface, with its playful rhymes, but sad underneath. The ending echoes the opening with a twist: he "couldn't die, / But navigate." That suggests he survives by steering through life, even if he never quite connects. The speaker seems sympathetic, though not fully certain.

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