( lost it ) — Summary

how can you just be gone? when we had just begun soft sparkling feeling yesterday you made me red i was over the moon in my head and now it's all come down to this so don't forget me please because i kept the stars hid them where i can't find them have lost them now i miss feeling that way warm, fuzzy like a summer dream without ice cream but you've lost me so dim the nightlight i won't be coming to you i'd be walking circles day dreaming about you or not, day dreaming just like i have always been but for the first time i was seen

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Winnie's poem is about a love that ended almost as soon as it started. The speaker is still stunned: "how can you just be gone?" Only yesterday they were "over the moon," and the poem keeps returning to that soft, sparkling, summer-dream feeling that has now vanished. Even the stars they saved have been hidden somewhere they can't find them, which makes the loss feel like something they did to themselves as well as something done to them.

The tone is gentle and childlike, with a nightlight, ice cream and daydreams, but under it sits real hurt. The speaker asks not to be forgotten, then pulls away, saying "you've lost me" and telling the other person to dim the nightlight. The last lines carry the most weight. The speaker has always been a daydreamer, drifting unnoticed, and this person was the first to truly see them. That is what makes the loss sting: the speaker misses the feeling of being noticed as much as the person.

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