Ancient Relic — Summary

Lost in earthen ware jars, Thrown to the tide and the dust storm, Forever I rearranged myself and started across town.

The streets were deserted, I wandered aimlessly, looking this way and that, Expecting to see the shroud in all its splendour. Too much as I rambled on at length, Hoping to see the new dawn and the brilliant primroses.

Aghast! My head and heart had swollen to immense proportions. I let myself drift in this sea of cacophonous swirling and abstractions. I hoped to stay and linger forever on this orbiting slab of debris. To watch awhile longer, the frenzied comings and goings of the twisted populace. To feel the sensations of blood pounding in my head And the animalistic mechanism of the heart pumping its oil around this aging body.

Oh joy! Tomorrow is a bank account of my life. I look foreword and wait. Expecting to what tomorrow will bring. The past is my record. No longer in the top fifty.

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Brian Routh's speaker begins as something battered and buried, an "ancient relic" lost in jars and tossed about by tide and dust storm, who somehow reassembles and sets off across an empty town. The wandering feels aimless, but there is a hope running through it: the speaker looks for a shroud in its splendour, a new dawn, bright primroses.

Then the mood swells. The speaker's head and heart feel overblown, and the world becomes a noisy, swirling mess of abstractions and "twisted" crowds. Even so, the speaker wants to stay and keep watching, feeling the pulse in the head and the heart pumping "oil" through an aging body, a phrase that makes the body sound like a machine.

The ending turns wry. Tomorrow is described like a bank account, and the past is a record that's "no longer in the top fifty." The speaker seems to greet the future with curious, slightly mocking cheer. The overall mood is restless and dizzy, but stubbornly eager to go on living.

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