Battered by the Rain — Summary

battered by the rain bowled over by the wind supplicant to winter snows and sizzled by the summer sun this was all i hoped to be almost too tired to walk sometimes consumed willingly by a longing that sought no end finding the warm flame of cosmic love in the streetlights reflected on wet pavement

i needed only a bunk somewhere a desk and some drawers for my clothes some pop-tarts and a cup of lentil soup each day

if demonstrators were gathering on first avenue to stand and bear witness if a friend needed help finding the airport to lead her to the queens-bound f train at two a.m. pushed along the sidewalk by the throngs pressed on all sides by other riders on the six

content to remain unrecognized wherever i went that was the only person i knew how to be

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The speaker looks back on a life of modest wants and finds it was enough. The opening lines pile up weather: rain, wind, snow, summer sun. The speaker is worn down by it, even "almost too tired to walk sometimes," yet describes this as "all i hoped to be." Even the glow of streetlights on wet pavement becomes a kind of "cosmic love."

The second stanza lists what was needed: a bunk, a desk, some pop-tarts, a cup of lentil soup. The last stanza fills in the city around that simple life. Judging by the street names and train lines, it is New York. The speaker joins protests, helps a friend get to the airport, and rides crowded subways. Each act is small, generous, and anonymous.

The final lines state the idea plainly: being unrecognized was "the only person / i knew how to be." The mood is humble, tender, and a little wistful. It reads as a quiet celebration of belonging to a crowd rather than standing out from it.

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