Bodies of Work — Poem analysis

nana said if she had waited to have children until she could afford them she would never have had children and the same goes for my mother and hers

nana said when the mills finally closed her mother worked whatever jobs she could find cooking cleaning piecework until she managed to go to nursing school

nana said once her mother was a fully trained nurse she worked nights at the hospital washing bodies mostly

nana said grandpa’s mother took in more foster children until the subsidies were enought to feed everyone

nana imparted the history of ancestors women whose bodies of work were the children they fought to feed

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Nobody in this poem gives a speech. What we hear instead is a grandmother's voice, relayed secondhand, with "nana said" returning like the opening of a story that has been told many times before. Dominique Cyprès builds "Bodies of Work" on that repetition, so it sounds less like something composed at a desk than something overheard at a kitchen table. The subject is how poverty, motherhood and labour have been braided together through generations of women in one family. The central idea sits in the title: these women's real "body of work", the phrase we normally reserve for artists, was the children they raised.

The poem has no rhyme, no punctuation and no capital letters. Lines break where a speaker might pause for breath, and the first stanza uses that freedom well. "She would / never / have had children" drops the single word "never" onto its own line, leaving a small silence where another life might have been. The logic is blunt. Affordability is not a hurdle to clear before having children, because for these women it was a point they would never reach. Then the speaker slips in with "my mother / and hers", and the short lines stack up like links in a chain.

The middle stanzas work like case files, each introduced by the same refrain and each showing a different way of surviving. When the mills close, the great-grandmother takes "cooking cleaning piecework", a list with no commas, so the jobs pile up without room to breathe. She "managed" to reach nursing school, a verb that suggests effort rather than ease. Once she qualifies, her work is "washing bodies mostly". That flat, unadorned phrase is one of the poem's quietest moments. The word "mostly" has the dry tone of someone who doesn't dress up hard work, and it plants the first literal bodies, flesh that needs tending, before the title's pun comes into play. The foster-care stanza is the most uneasy. Taking in "more foster children" until the subsidies cover the household suggests that love and money cannot be pulled apart. The poem doesn't judge this. It simply reports it, and the reader is left to feel the complexity.

The last stanza changes the vocabulary. Until now nana has "said"; now she "imparted the history / of ancestors". "Imparted" is a more formal, gift-like word, closer to handing down an inheritance than chatting, and "ancestors" lifts cooks, cleaners and night-shift nurses into a lineage worth remembering. Then comes the key turn: "women whose bodies / of work were the children". The line break after "bodies" lets the physical word land first, with its suggestion of pregnancy, exhaustion and endurance, before "of work" completes the familiar idiom. Only then does the phrase become a claim about what counts as an achievement. The verb "fought to feed" is the only forceful one in the poem, and its repeated "f" sound lends it extra weight. Under the calm retelling there was a struggle all along.

The poem is significant because it quietly argues about what we call work. The jobs it lists, in mills, kitchens and hospitals, are the kind history tends to flatten into statistics. The poem insists that the unpaid, unrecorded labour of keeping children alive belongs in the same account. It also avoids sentimentality. Nothing is resolved, and nobody becomes rich or rescued. The poem ends on the verb "feed", a reminder that the stakes were always basic.

The poem is also an act of passing on. By repeating nana's words, the speaker becomes the next link in the chain the first stanza set up, and the poem itself becomes a small monument to women whose work was seldom recorded.

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