Red Shift — Summary

Dominique CyprèsContemplative

when we were five years old the world we knew was eight blocks wide wherever i was in the universe your voice would carry by citizens’ band

in years to come the grid that held our world expanded even crossed the state line you called my house on still evenings

everything changed the day i heard that the universe was blowing up like a balloon growing more quickly all the time destined not to pop but to dissolve that galaxies were devouring each other whole sending star systems hurtling into the dark in slow motion that from a distance the sun is a mote of dust suspended on a strand of dark matter an axon or dendrite in the cosmic brain reaching out in all directions and backward in time

from the window of an ascending plane i saw you opening the door to your car i wondered where you were going you wondered whether my shadow belonged to a bird

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Two people begin as children whose whole world is eight blocks wide, close enough that a voice can reach across it by citizens' band radio. As they grow up, that world stretches past the state line, but the connection holds: the friend still phones the speaker's house on quiet evenings. Then the speaker learns how vast and restless the universe really is, expanding faster and faster, galaxies swallowing one another, the sun shrinking to a speck of dust. Nothing feels the same afterward.

The title, "Red Shift," points to light stretching as things move apart, and the poem lets distance work as both science and feeling. The final scene is quietly sad. From a plane, the speaker sees the friend as a tiny figure at a car door, and neither can really know the other's path. The friend mistakes the speaker's shadow for a bird. The mood is wistful and hushed, a tender closeness slowly pulled thin by scale.

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