A rainbow unweaved — Summary

Falling asleep, we’re lost at sea, each swell of the surface is a pull from the deep,

every second threatened by a silence waiting to claim the music that lingers in shivering vibrations…

…light plays games with sound-waves; a spiderweb stretches across darkness as we segue into dreams.

For hours we remain there where time has no significance.

In the morning, when the mind emerges – a butterfly crawling from its chrysalis, given the gift of one day to live – you will tell me your dreams.

They are sometimes mundane, but often they are strange & beautiful:

a flock of birds somehow derail the train taking you to an unknown destination, but you escape from disaster by leaping out of a window & land softly in a meadow of wildflowers.

I don’t speak about my dreams.

I don’t speak about disturbing scenes of eating glass as a crowd attacks & tears the flesh from my bones with their hands,

or

a desert that doesn’t grow, but moves slowly forward with the eerie movement of mist…

Last night, I had a dream, that poetry still mattered & you presented me with lilacs as behind you the crowd demanded answers, but we calmed them with elegant words.

Then I awoke, smoked four cigarettes, showered shit dressed

& went to work.

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Falling asleep is pictured here as drifting out to sea, with each swell pulling the sleepers toward something deeper. The speaker and a partner share this passage, and in the morning the partner recounts their dreams: odd, often lovely ones, like escaping a derailed train and landing in a meadow of wildflowers. The speaker stays quiet. Their own dreams are violent and unsettling, full of eating glass, a hungry crowd, and a desert creeping forward like mist.

The turn comes with the last dream, in which poetry still matters, lilacs are offered, and a restless crowd is calmed with "elegant words." It's the gentlest image in the poem, and perhaps the most painful, because waking cuts it off. The flat, hurried list at the end (cigarettes, shower, "shit," dress, work) feels deflated. The mood moves from hushed and dreamlike to bleak and weary, suggesting the speaker's hope for poetry's worth survives only while asleep.

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