The End (re-written) — Summary

One last mouldering kiss, before your lips let slip a cut that split my tongue apart.

Our internal heat lost all warmth; a distance so vast in a space so small.

Now nothing remains between us, but bodies diving deep into silence,

As I try to hide my aching eyes; you try to speak; but words are just worms crawling to the surface of my mind:

I can’t hear anything.

The soil is choked by salt: I have fucked this up.

So let every worm be eaten by birds; take away every word my love & let me think no more.

Your eyes, your smile & all those moments together:

soon the touch of those memories will slowly disappear & only the faintest trace will remain…

The heart that once pressed against me every night, the heart that belongs to you, will never be close to me again, yet wherever we find ourselves next, whoever else we let into our beds,

the feeling will always remain in my chest.

How I wish this could be the end of everything, but it isn’t.

It’s just the end of what was us.

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Written as the speaker's account of a relationship's final moments, the poem begins with a kiss that already feels like decay, followed by a hurtful remark that "split my tongue apart." The couple lie close but are emotionally miles away, and the speaker admits blame: "I have fucked this up."

The central image is of words as worms. Rather than comfort, speech becomes something wriggling and unpleasant, and the speaker wants silence, even wishing the words to be eaten by birds so they can "think no more." Underneath this is grief for the little things being lost: eyes, a smile, the heart that once pressed close each night.

The mood is raw, quiet and resigned. Rather than ending in melodrama, the poem lands on a plain, painful truth. The feeling will stay in the speaker's chest, and though they wish everything could end, only "what was us" does. The calm of that last line makes it hit harder.

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