I looked through some old photos — Summary

& the memories surfaced like

smoke from a furnace;

up from the chest & through the throat

to find a home behind the eyes..

When our hands have searched & found

the feelings we wish to drown;

when our dreams creep & crawl along the night

into the darkest corners where

creatures hide;

when

the words become sounds unbound

from meaning only vague feelings

& images remain,

What happens then?

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Looking at old photographs sets off something physical in the speaker. The memories rise "like smoke from a furnace," travelling from the chest, through the throat, and settling behind the eyes, so the reader feels grief arriving in the body before it becomes a thought. The furnace image suggests something that has been burning quietly all along.

The second half is one long, unfinished sentence. It describes searching for feelings we'd rather drown, dreams that crawl into the dark where "creatures hide," and words that lose their meaning until only vague feelings and images are left. The poem seems to be asking what remains when language gives out. It never answers. The closing question, "What happens then?", simply hangs there.

The mood is hushed, uneasy, and a little haunted. The loose punctuation and broken line breaks make it feel like a thought that drifts and trails off, much as memory does.

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