State of Decline — Summary

Sandcastles and quarantine.

Came when I needed harmony.

Too wounded to be wise.

Too wounded to be kind.

Just in a state of decline.

We just call it living.

Most take whilst some are giving.

They don’t care about their limits.

Just in a state of decline.

Connected to it all when I am high. Connected to it all when I am low.

No matter the state, we’re connected to it all.

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Ridpath's speaker describes a low, worn-down stretch of life, and the short, blunt lines make it feel like someone muttering rather than performing. The opening image, "Sandcastles and quarantine," pairs something fragile and playful with isolation, as if anything built here is bound to wash away. The speaker admits being "too wounded to be wise" and "too wounded to be kind," a frank confession that pain has made them smaller than they'd like to be.

The refrain "Just in a state of decline" returns like a shrug. Then the poem widens: "We just call it living," and some people take while others give, with those who take ignoring their limits. Decline starts to look less like a personal failing and more like a shared condition.

The ending shifts the mood. High or low, the speaker says, "we're connected to it all." It isn't exactly hopeful, but it's less lonely. The poem settles into tired acceptance, with a quiet sense of belonging underneath.

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