(1943) — Summary

J.J. LoeAnxious

That year the sea rose slowly from the plain / crashing into life swollen as an infant. — A thing of its own shadow traced out of the ripple. — Salt white over red sand passed from bosom into hand.

Everything that year stopped seeking / stopped struggling with it’s fate.

Things primal held in their primacy things with meanings unknown before. — A fleet of sea-ships auspiciously set strewn upon the floors bind the time and the space to a strange

and distant sounding place. Where the bleeding tide

fares a name and the breaking penumbra threads the swelling furrows of the plain passed from bosom into red.

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The poem imagines the sea slowly rising from a plain, as if water were being born on dry land. It is described as "swollen as an infant," so it feels both new and threatening. The year in the title, 1943, is the only date we are given, and the poem never says what happened in it. Judging by the imagery, though, that year feels like a turning point, when "everything stopped struggling with its fate."

The speaker seems awed and uneasy rather than openly afraid. Words like "primal" and "primacy" suggest that old, elemental forces have returned, and ordinary things take on meanings they never had before. Red sand, a "bleeding tide," and furrows that turn "red" hint at violence or loss, though the poem leaves this as suggestion. The broken, dash-filled lines make the mood hushed and dreamlike, as if the speaker is remembering something half understood. The result is solemn, eerie, and strangely quiet.

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