A Passage — Summary

J.J. LoeRomantic

Through the coitus of skin and sky and through the nocturnal delights which cleave the eye from it’s starry destination — the bare keel of the universe breaks the relics of our lucky stars where each body connects to create this corporal ship.

Blue meadows roll from your brow / cut the starboard hour with the bronze peal of the morning star. Solar plains spire from the quiet asylum of your ear. In the first rays of the morning sun your hair trails of thought / an ancient shore line. — And I, a sailor, am shipwrecked in the light which moves its flawed draw across thy cool hand.

Passing into white communion a pure brightness intuitively human like dreams through the air we breathe driven outward from art and death — We abandon the cold geometry’s of our flesh and sex becoming without boundaries: ocean size.

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Loe's poem imagines a night of physical intimacy as a voyage, with the lovers' joined bodies forming a single "corporal ship." The sea imagery runs throughout: a keel, a starboard hour, a shoreline, a sailor. The beloved's body becomes a landscape. Meadows roll from the brow, plains rise from the ear, and hair trails like an ancient coast in the morning light. The speaker casts himself as a sailor, "shipwrecked in the light," which suggests he is overwhelmed rather than harmed, lost in wonder at the other person.

The feeling is awe mixed with surrender. In the last stanza, the lovers leave behind the "cold geometry" of their separate bodies and become "without boundaries: ocean size." The mood moves from dark and charged at the start to bright and expansive at the end, as though night gives way to dawn. The language is dense and sometimes strange, so it helps to read it as a series of images rather than a plain story.

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