Porch — Summary

Distant rushing traffic Spinning jet turbines The low rumble and soft whistle Metal tube squealing in a steel vacuum

Peppered by drops of ominous precipitation Rain unconvinced it should've fallen in the first place GuaCarole-green leaves of some common urban tree Limbs sway listlessly in a breeze equally lacking conviction

Afternoon dew clings to the edges Globular microcosms rage against single-cell chaos Eventually overcome by their own weight Plummet to grass Give their shape to the urban landscape Roaming nodes on a salivating tongue

The whole place Is loud Teeming with life, the water moves with it The air through it

Mothers and fathers with children in daycare Confusion Mechanical faculties of delivery and collection Groceries or garbage Sent away, picked up

The whole universe moves in and out A pulsing heart Distant rushing traffic Is blood fighting clots To keep its flow a perfect circle

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Sitting on a porch on a damp afternoon, the speakers listen to the city and slowly start to see it as a living body. The opening lines are all sound: distant traffic, jet engines, a low rumble. Then the rain arrives, hesitant and half-hearted, and even the breeze seems to lack conviction. Dew drops cling to leaves, swell until they get too heavy, and fall into the grass.

The mood begins as drowsy and a little flat, but it builds. Ordinary things like parents dropping off kids, deliveries, and garbage pickup become part of one big system of coming and going. By the end, the poem pictures the whole universe as a pulsing heart, with the traffic as blood pushing past clots to keep moving in a circle. The tone is observant and quietly awed, finding something alive in the noise of a plain urban afternoon.

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