Remnants — Summary

Mark MaxeyContemplative

pebbles exposed from the concrete bridge, where in the comer, near the top slept the young man forgotten dreams dripped from his cheek left alone to fight dreams abandoned by his grandfather nomad lad leaving nothing exposed to the weather, world crumbles as does the bridge he sleeps under

on the road lies a dead armadillo, an offering to the crows the dark night winds are his mentors solicited sonatas dances through the branches black asphalt paths trampled by the masses that lead nowhere

and in the crumbled pieces a remnant only seen by the lad left alone... abandoned for another he sees what others have forgotten in overgrown grass fields. ..mushroom expressions await his steps

and through the dark clouds a light, blue green rays escape from the east horizon beckons his attention

brushing his hair from his eyes he gathers his belongings and sets out upon his destined journeys

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A young man sleeps in the corner of a crumbling concrete bridge, and the poem follows him from that cold shelter back out onto the road. Everything around him feels worn down: the bridge is breaking apart, a dead armadillo lies on the road for the crows, and the asphalt paths made by crowds lead nowhere. The speaker seems to see him with sympathy. He carries "forgotten dreams" and the weight of ones his grandfather abandoned, and he appears alone and overlooked.

Yet the poem refuses to stay bleak. Where others see only ruin, the young man notices "remnants" and strange beauty, such as mushrooms in overgrown grass. Then a blue-green light breaks through the dark clouds in the east and calls to him. He pushes his hair back, gathers his things, and leaves. The mood begins in loneliness and decay, but it ends quietly hopeful, as though being forgotten has given him the freedom to find his own path.

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