November's Thaw — Summary

Beneath the November snow is a dream frozen animated in spring which now seems abandoned extinguished by words others uttered that should have been ignored wrapped around a passion of fire a dream awaits the thaw that can only come from within and the snow struggles to snuff it out

a voice inside the throat awaits a guttural release expelled from the diaphragms force from a rage of repressed years rattled by an accidental adventure that voice from long ago is faintly heard cries for the child to wake from it's slumber

and the end of the year awaits a decision a child like star gaze touched by the angel of wishes cannot lay down forever frozen by tears of desertion that only a November thaw can melt

can destiny be forsaken more than once before it's extinguished forever or can a voice from long ago be allowed to speak even in November

November's thaw weeps for birth

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Mark Maxey's poem is about a dream that has been silenced but not killed. The speaker pictures it lying under November snow, smothered by other people's words that should have been ignored. Yet it still burns underneath, a "passion of fire" waiting for a thaw that, the poem insists, can only come from within.

The second half turns to a voice. It sits in the throat, built up from years of repressed rage, and is faintly heard again after some accidental adventure. It calls on the inner child to wake up. The speaker seems to feel both longing and regret, and a real fear of running out of time as the year ends. The questions near the close ask whether destiny can be abandoned more than once, or whether the old voice can still speak "even in November."

The mood is wintry and sad, but also hopeful. The final line, with the thaw "weeping for birth," suggests that grief and new beginnings may arrive together.

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