Is This It? #2 — Summary

Mike StoneContemplative

O the deliciousness of the moment

When the earth decides all by itself

To turn its face from the oppressive summer heat

To the cool breath of winter.

I almost missed it when

Daisy leapt to catch the leash in her mouth

And wrest it from my unsuspecting hand,

Pleased with herself we’d had a good walk Whatever that is in the heart of her mind.

Is this it?

Or is that it?

Here or there?

The thing that I’ll remember for the rest of my life

Or the thing that will be remembered instead of me?

I almost missed it like when

I almost missed the look of your smile

When it got up in the morning

On the day you changed from young to old.

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Mike Stone starts with a small, happy surprise: the seasons turning, the earth easing away from summer heat toward winter's cool. Then an ordinary event interrupts it. His dog, Daisy, snatches the leash from his hand, pleased with herself and with the walk they've had. The speaker almost misses all of it, and that near-miss is what the poem is really about.

From there the tone shifts to a quiet, anxious question: "Is this it?" Which moment will he carry for the rest of his life, and which will simply outlast him, remembered "instead of me"? He can't tell in the moment, and that uncertainty is the heart of the poem.

The ending is the most tender part. He admits he almost missed the look of a loved one's smile on the morning she changed "from young to old." The mood is warm but touched with regret, a gentle reminder to pay attention while important things are still happening.

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