Three Views of the Valley — Summary

Mike StoneAnxious

Galloping Mongol hordes of ghostly riders,

Wombless mothers, dead loves, and wailing zeitgeisten Rush down the rock-strewn hills toward the lone house In the valley of the shadow.

Steeds stampeding with thunderous hooves Splashing through the blood of breast-sprung dreams,

Khan, my father, with open book against his heart.

Swooping me up from the quaking earth

And me without a tear to slake his tyrannous thirst.

Nobody to hear the sound of his valiant voice Or to read his grave words.

Nobody to hear his tree fall in the forest.

All is silence.

“Come to the table, your soup will be cold.”

They sit at the table in the lone house Sipping their soups.

He reads his book with his left hand holding the pages down And his right lifting the steamy spoon to his lips.

She reads the news and spoons the hot liquid blowing gently. Only silence.

A neighbor standing in his field Across the valley from the lone house Said he was a nice man.

Minded his own bees wax,

A little hard to get to know.

Never really shared a mess kit with us.

If you know what I mean.

Susurrating silences.

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Mike Stone's poem looks at one man, the speaker's father, from three angles, and each gives a different picture. In the first, the speaker imagines him as a Mongol khan, with ghostly riders thundering down the hills toward the lone house. It's a wild, violent fantasy, and the father is both frightening and grand, carrying a book against his heart. The speaker says he has "not a tear" to give him, which suggests guilt or distance. In the second view, the myth shrinks to a quiet dinner. He reads while eating soup, she reads the news, and nobody talks. In the third, a neighbor offers the kind of vague praise people give someone they never knew: "a nice man," private, "a little hard to get to know."

The mood is lonely and hushed. Silence ends each section, and by the last line it feels like a presence in its own right. The poem suggests that a person can seem huge inside a family and almost invisible outside it, and that even those closest may never really reach him.

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