This Particular Sunrise — Summary

Mike StoneContemplative

This particular sunrise Springs invisible from my breast,

Just the thinking of you.

This new day,

This cobalt light.

It's like a beginning.

Even my old neighbor,

I wonder does he also have Such poems in his head?

But distant, the thunder clouds roil.

Once again the long night snakes across the plain.

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Mike Stone's poem begins with a feeling too big to stay inside. The speaker watches a sunrise, but the real light seems to come from within: it "springs invisible" from his chest, set off by nothing more than thinking of someone he loves. The short, spare lines add to the sense of a fresh start. "This new day" and "This cobalt light" read like small, quiet discoveries, and "It's like a beginning" is said simply, almost with surprise.

The mood widens when the speaker thinks of his old neighbor and wonders if he, too, carries "such poems" in his head. It's a tender moment, a hint that ordinary people may hold private happiness. Then the tone shifts. Thunder clouds "roil" in the distance, and the long night "snakes across the plain" again. The poem doesn't say what the darkness means, but it leaves the joy shadowed by something returning. The result is hopeful and fragile at once, a bright morning with weather waiting beyond it.

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