Your World — Summary

Mike StoneRomantic

Footsteps on wet sand half filled with brackish water,

Walking towards me and away.

I squat down and scoop up a handful of grains and broken shells And sift them through my gnarled fingers.

My years make a small hill beside the Mediterranean.

I sit on the stone lip of a water fountain, to one side.

The child, confident in the always of your love.

Leaps toward your distant arms and miraculously, just in time.

You scoop him out of the air, whirling around together.

Smiles and kisses, hugs and laughing.

When you pulled me toward the hills and valleys of your dark world I fell to you like Icarus, melting wax and arms flailing.

I tried to memorize you, you mesmerized me.

I breathed your raven coolness, exhaled your sundance.

The constellation of you beat against the windows of my soul,

I ran to you, I ran away, I was paralyzed.

Your seas lapped gently at my dream, eroding it in shimmering vapors. Now I wander through your eden lost.

Somewhere between love and death.

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An older man sits by the Mediterranean, sifting sand and shells through his fingers, and looks back on a love that has ended. The scene on the beach gives the poem its frame: footsteps coming and going, and a child leaping into a parent's arms, certain he will be caught. That child's easy trust is exactly what the speaker no longer has.

The central memory is of falling for someone mysterious. The speaker compares himself to Icarus, flailing as the wax melts, which suggests he knew the fall was coming but couldn't stop it. He admired and was dazzled at once, and he ran toward the person and away from them, frozen between the two. The poem suggests the relationship slowly wore down his dream rather than ending in one dramatic blow.

The mood is wistful and quiet, tinged with loss. Mentions of his "gnarled fingers" and "years" give it a sense of time slipping by. The last line leaves him suspended "between love and death," unable to settle either way.

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