Wind Pokes 'Round — Poem analysis

Vomit thru lacework; gnarled feet bound in crumpled newsprint/ dark winds howl inside your sanctuary

Bits of stolen fish stuck between broken teeth, you cough a warm poem into folds of torn blanket.

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The wind in Nathaniel S. Rounds's title sounds almost friendly, like a nosy neighbour poking 'round a fence. By the end of the first stanza that mischief has hardened into "dark winds" that "howl". The gap between the offhand title and the harsh poem beneath it is where the meaning begins.

The poem never says who "you" is, but its details point, by inference, to someone living without proper shelter: feet "bound / in crumpled newsprint", a "torn blanket", fish that has been "stolen". Rounds opens with a jolt rather than a scene-setting sentence. "Vomit thru lacework" has no verb and no explanation, so the reader must decide how the two nouns fit together. Lace is delicate, domestic, decorative, and vomit is its opposite. Perhaps the lacework is a frayed, holey garment, or a pattern of bare branches. The poem doesn't settle it, but the collision is the point: beauty and bodily misery share one phrase. The casual spelling "thru" adds to the hurried, stripped-down feel, as if language has been cut back to what can be afforded.

Newsprint is a shrewd choice. It is cheap, everywhere, and discarded the moment it has been read, so it suits a person the world has also discarded. It is also printed language, which quietly prepares for the ending: words are already wrapped around this body before a poem comes out of it. The slash after "newsprint/" is odd. It is neither comma nor full stop, and it sits at a line break that doesn't need marking. It reads like a hard cut or a torn edge, matching the ragged materials, and it stops the sentence without resolving it.

Then comes "dark winds howl / inside your sanctuary". The word "sanctuary" is bitterly ironic, since a sanctuary should keep weather and danger out and here the wind has got in. Yet the word isn't purely ironic. To call this place a sanctuary is to grant it the dignity the person has made of it, and the speaker's direct address, "your", sounds like a witness rather than a pitying onlooker.

The second stanza changes the music. The first is chopped up: short lines, a semicolon, a slash, and no closing punctuation, so the wind is still howling when the stanza ends. The second is a single sentence that runs across its line breaks and arrives at the poem's only full stop. There is no rhyme scheme, though "'round" in the title and "bound" in line two chime faintly, as if the wind's name were echoed in the tying of the feet. The rhythm is irregular and built from heavy monosyllables. "Dark winds howl" and "gnarled feet bound" are hard to say quickly, and in "Bits of stolen fish stuck / between broken teeth" the clustered b's and st sounds clatter like the teeth they describe.

The last two lines turn everything over. "You cough a warm poem into folds / of torn blanket" echoes the opening vomit, since the body is again expelling something. This time what comes out is a poem, and it is "warm", the only warm thing in the text. It may suggest breath visible in cold air. The poem isn't composed at a desk. It is coughed, involuntary and physical, and it vanishes into cloth instead of reaching a reader. One could read the poem we are holding as that same coughed poem, though that is an interpretation, not something the text states.

The central idea seems to be that creativity and dignity survive where almost nothing else does, and that they survive without audience or reward. Rounds avoids pleading and moral summary and trusts objects instead: paper, lace, fish bones, a blanket. That restraint is what makes the poem worth studying. In nine short lines it shows how compression, awkward punctuation and one reversal in the final line can turn a picture of deprivation into an act of defiance.

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