Labannotation for Dancing on Tin — Summary

Eight years ago, Noticing the indentation in the face Of your bedroom doorknob, You puUed out a Swiss army knife And got cracking. Shazam! There it was, a secret plastic hideaway. Now home to your high school ring, various tom Tickets from theme park rides, a picture of a starlet From Tl^ Guide. She remains unreachable, albeit A faithful confidante and source of inspiration.

You took a correspondence course in accounting. Got a job in a big box bizarre. Made an unshakeable oath to bathe twice daily. You've poured all your savings into oatmeal creme pies.

That starlet-sans-name. She's The rosette button On your trailer ceiling tile. The recurring pattern of A funny mirror seamstress. Sewing up the ramparts Of your heart.

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The poem speaks to a "you" whose life is small, odd, and a little sad, and it watches him with a mix of teasing and tenderness. Eight years back, he pried open his doorknob with a Swiss army knife and found a hidden compartment, which he filled with keepsakes: a class ring, torn ride tickets, a magazine photo of a starlet. She is "unreachable," yet she becomes his confidante and his inspiration.

The middle stanza lists his adult habits in a flat, deadpan voice: a correspondence course, a job at a big box store, a strict bathing oath, and savings spent on oatmeal creme pies. These details are funny, but they also suggest a narrow, lonely routine.

In the last stanza the starlet turns up in everyday things, like a ceiling button or a pattern in a funny mirror. The closing image of "sewing up the ramparts / of your heart" suggests that the longing both protects him and walls him in. The mood is playful, wistful, and quietly compassionate.

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