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Nathaniel S. RoundsContemplative

The sun bleaches peeling paint of white on a cement building for laundry. Windows, tall and narrow, checked with blue bubbles, reflect some of the light and drown the rest in blue waters.

The building's on a corner. The sun shines on one half while forgetting the other.

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A laundry, a corner, some afternoon light: Nathaniel S. Rounds picks about the least glamorous subject a poet could choose, then makes it quietly strange. On the surface, the poem describes a cement building where laundry is done, bleached by the sun, its windows glinting blue. Underneath, it is about how light behaves, how it cleans and wears away in the same gesture, and how it treats the world unevenly.

The first irony is in the opening line. "The sun bleaches / peeling paint of white" gives us a paint that is already white, being made whiter, or paler, or simply less. Bleaching is what a laundry does to cloth, so the building that exists to clean things is itself being bleached by the sun. The sun also leaves it peeling. The word order is a little off: "peeling paint of white" rather than "white peeling paint." That puts the damage first and the colour second, as if whiteness were only what is left over.

The windows turn the poem toward water. They are "tall and narrow, checked / with blue bubbles," and the word "checked" can mean patterned, inspected, or held back. The "bubbles" could be flaws in the glass, but they also suggest soap suds, which suits a laundry. Judging by the imagery, the windows behave like a surface of water: they "reflect some / of the light and drown the / rest in blue waters." "Drown" is a surprisingly violent verb for a calm scene, and the line break helps it along. The line ends on the weak word "the," which hangs there before the sentence sinks into "rest in blue waters." A hard cement building briefly becomes something liquid and underwater, with the blue absorbing the sun's light the way the white paint cannot.

Formally, the poem is free verse with no rhyme and no regular beat. The short lines are broken mid-phrase ("Windows, / tall and narrow"; "some / of the light"), so the reader has to keep stepping forward to find the sense. The sound is gentle: the soft *b* of "bleaches," "blue" and "bubbles," and the long vowels of "blue waters," give the first stanza a damp, rounded feel that contrasts with the dry, flaking paint.

Then the second stanza changes pace. "The building's on a corner" is flat and plain, almost a fact scribbled in a notebook. The shortness is deliberate, because the corner explains everything that follows. A corner is where two walls meet at an angle, so one side catches the sun and the other does not. "The sun shines on one half / while forgetting the other." The sun is given a human flaw, absent-mindedness. It does not choose to neglect the shaded wall; it forgets, which is gentler than cruelty and perhaps sadder. The poem ends on "the other," the unlit side, so its last words fall on exactly the part that is overlooked.

That ending also nudges the reader to notice what the poem has done. Nearly all of it describes the lit half: the paint, the windows, the glare. The shaded half appears only at the very end, almost as an afterthought. The poem seems to practise the same uneven attention it describes, though that is an inference from its structure, not something it states. Whatever the intention, the effect is that we feel the neglected wall more strongly because it was left out.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it gets from so little. There are no people, no explanation and no stated feeling, only a white wall, blue glass and a line of shadow. Yet the images suggest a few ideas. Cleaning and wearing away can be the same process. An ordinary place can contain a whole drowned world in its windows. Light, which we tend to think of as generous, hands out its attention unfairly. A student writing about the poem might notice that it never says whether this is good or bad. The sun simply shines, forgets, and moves on, and the poem leaves us standing on the corner to decide what we think about the half that stays in shadow.

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