November Grass — Poem analysis

By the feral river bank rose shrubs with thorny stems coalesce with November grass.

Catbirds call after field mice.

Pin cherry trees clothed with Bengal-red leaves haunt the hole in which the farmhouse fell.

There remains nowhere to dwell save under the stars by the vagabond's fire.

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November is the month when a place quietly changes hands. Nothing dramatic happens in Nathaniel S. Rounds's "November Grass". There is a riverbank, some birds, a few trees, a ruined house and a fire. Arranged in order, though, these things tell a small story about what happens when people leave the land and the land stops remembering them. The poem suggests that nature doesn't so much destroy human settlement as absorb it, and that what is left for people is the oldest shelter there is: the open sky.

The first stanza sets the tone with its word choice. "Feral" is normally used for animals that were once tame and have gone wild again. Applied to a riverbank, it hints that this land has a domestic past it has shaken off. Then comes "rose shrubs with thorny stems / coalesce with November grass." The line break creates a brief ambiguity, because "rose" can be read as a verb before it turns out to be part of the plant's name, so the shrubs seem to rise out of the bank at the very moment we meet them. "Coalesce" is a surprisingly scientific, abstract word among such plain ones, and it fits. Thorns and dry grass are not planted or arranged. They simply merge into one tangled mass. The poem picks the thorns, not the blossoms, so the wildness here is a little hostile.

The two-line second stanza is the shortest and sharpest. "Catbirds call / after field mice" works partly through the name, since a catbird sounds like a hybrid hunter. Whether or not the birds actually chase mice, the phrasing makes the whole bank feel like a place of pursuit and appetite. The hard c in "catbirds call" and the clipped, two-beat rhythm make the lines snap like a twig. It is a moment of pure animal activity with no human witness in it.

Humans only return in the third stanza, and then only as an absence. The pin cherry trees are "clothed with Bengal-red leaves", a personification that gives the trees something the people no longer have. "Bengal-red" is a rich, almost exotic colour for a northern autumn, and a reader may hear a faint tiger-like fierceness in it. These trees "haunt the hole / in which the farmhouse fell." The verb "haunt" turns the trees into ghosts or caretakers of the site, and "hole" is a deliberately ugly, flat word for what used to be a home. The poem never says why the house fell. That silence is a strength, because it lets the collapse feel as natural and inevitable as leaves dropping.

The last stanza brings the human consequence. "There remains nowhere to dwell" is the only line that sounds like a conclusion, and its flat, plain wording makes it feel final. The word "dwell" also rhymes with "fell" from the stanza before. In a poem with no regular rhyme scheme, that echo across a stanza break links the fallen house to the homelessness that follows from it. A softer thread of f sounds runs through the whole poem in "feral," "field," "farmhouse," "fell" and finally "fire," as if the poem were quietly tracing the path from wildness to ruin to the one small flame that is left. The "vagabond's fire" is both bleak and strangely freeing. The vagabond owns nothing, yet has the stars for a roof and the same freedom as the catbirds.

Formally, the poem is free verse in stanzas of three, two, four and three lines, with short lines that mostly carry two or three stresses. Only the third stanza stretches into a longer, more flowing sentence, and that is where the loss is described. The poem is brief and nearly all concrete nouns, from "shrubs" to "mice" to "fire", which gives it the look of a small, clear picture where every object counts.

What makes "November Grass" worth reading is that it trusts its images. It doesn't lament or lecture, and it never explains the farmhouse's fate. Instead it lets the thorns, the birds and the red leaves speak, and the reader feels the shift of power from people to the land. In a few lines it asks a large question: what is a home, if a tree can be better clothed than the family that once lived here?

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