The Life and Death of Dear John (Ritter's, Port Orange, FL) — Summary

So while eating

frozen custard with the street rods parked nearby you seemed hesitant and you sat down beneath an unremarkable picnic table umbrella and while other people drove in and parked on the grass because parking was so scant you stared through me and beyond and looked. bewildered and I called the funeral parlor for the ambulance while you puked protest and false teeth and eyes turned to white and people surrounded you like a Busby Berkeley flower dance and uncoiled upon command by a nurse in the

crowd and this was where

you came to wonder if

someone off camera

had gathered up the wind in the hollow of his hands and wrapped your blood and

tears in a mantle

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The poem recounts a sudden collapse at a frozen custard stand. The speaker and a companion, "Dear John," are eating among parked street rods when John grows hesitant, sits beneath a plain umbrella, and stares blankly. His eyes roll white, and he vomits. The speaker, in a dazed muddle, calls the "funeral parlor" for an ambulance, a slip that hints at how close death is. A crowd gathers around John, and the speaker compares them to a Busby Berkeley dance, a strange, almost festive image of people circling in a pattern until a nurse tells them to move back.

The mood begins in ordinary summer ease and tips into panic, then something quieter and stranger. The last lines turn to John's own point of view, imagining him wondering whether someone out of sight had "gathered up the wind" and wrapped his blood and tears in a mantle. The speaker seems helpless and shaken, and the title suggests John does not survive. The ending offers a tender, mysterious image of death.

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