Death Is the Enemy and Your Mother Is Runner's Up — Summary

Don't see Susie Lake no more Since she quit her job at the party store

Today, I’m going to take some black ink And a razor

Cut you out of my history book

Replace your portrait with an angel Flying low in the shadows of tomorrow

She told me the best things in life are free As we hitchhiked alongside the 103

While the chicken extinguished the burning food blender A cowboy with a cleft pallet.

And a cauliflower for a left ear

Explained his feelings to his boots

You see, he said softly, Your love for me Has helped me see things inside myself that T’ve never seen before....

Things like.., said the boots

The cowboy considered

My intestines he said

Mmm-hmm, came the rejoinder

And my trachea, said the cowboy

Yesssss, said the boots

And my spleen, he concluded. Never seen a spleen before...

And sorrow was her baby

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Underneath its jokes, this is a breakup poem. The speaker plans to take black ink and a razor and cut someone out of his "history book," swapping their portrait for an angel. It's a violent, almost childish way of erasing a person, and it suggests how much the loss still hurts.

Then the poem veers into nonsense. A chicken puts out a burning blender, and a cowboy with a cauliflower ear talks to his boots, listing his organs as if they were love discoveries. The boots answer like a patient therapist or a lover: "Mmm-hmm," "Yesssss." The scene is funny, but it also mocks how strangely intimate and self-revealing love can be.

The mood is deadpan, scattered, and sad underneath. Small, ordinary details, like Susie Lake and the party store, sit beside the surreal ones, as if the speaker's mind can't hold a straight line. The last line, "And sorrow was her baby," lands quietly and suggests the real feeling the humor has been circling.

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