Octochord (Loganberry Broken) — Summary

Both courageous and content are the five nullified architects of industrial Milwaukee, home to Azerbaijan donkeys, the architect and ass jammed into irrational boxes and then Freud-washed and unleashed, their surrealist manifesto proclaimed by saxophones at noonday, vomiting fluorescent apology to my spilled intestines as a broken record : "Here lies the autograph of a minor vaudeville star, his opening night at the Apollo filled with stale jokes and chatter, every seat occupied by a former lover, the room an open wound taken by the river of regret, His heart holds a road that spills into a tar pit. The road has been named twice."

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Nathaniel S. Rounds's poem doesn't follow a straight line, and it's best read the way you'd listen to a strange dream. It opens with a jumble of images: architects, donkeys, Milwaukee factories, Freud, saxophones. They collide in a way that feels deliberately absurd, as if logic has been put in a box and shaken. The speaker seems sick and overwhelmed, "vomiting" apology and spilling intestines, which suggests a body and mind coming apart.

Then the tone shifts. The poem turns to a washed-up vaudeville star whose opening night is attended only by former lovers. That scene is the emotional centre. The room becomes "an open wound" and a "river of regret," and the road in the heart ends in a tar pit. Judging by the imagery, the poem is about failure, embarrassment, and being trapped by past love. The mood is darkly comic, chaotic, and sad. The final line, "The road has been named twice," is left unexplained, which adds to the unsettled feeling.

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