A Thunderclap — Summary

they said it was an orange color a million volts created by clouds and it struck one long fatal bolt like a giant samurai sword into the tallest tree next to the soccer field

it glowed and flashed as pure energy electrons speeding forward with unspeakable power as it hit the people underneath the tree and killed the boy

he was fifteen the height of a man but the soft clear face of a boy with searching eyes reddish hair curled above his ears just watching, waiting for the rain to stop and then the flash shot across the field down the tree in an infinitesimal moment in the breadth of a butterfly in a part of a second no more than could register on a human retina

he was gone, his life like all others only a flickering a tiny view on a world we discover is infinite,

his parents and his sister grieved at their loss their child ripped away by a lightening storm dashed from life from all that mattered all that was promised with no reason but the speed and death of a thunderclap

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Orrin Schwab's poem recounts a lightning strike that kills a fifteen-year-old boy standing under a tree beside a soccer field. It begins almost like a report, with the speaker relaying what "they said" about the bolt's color and power, and comparing it to a samurai sword. The language of science and violence is vivid but distant.

Then the poem slows down and looks at the boy himself: his reddish hair, his searching eyes, his face caught between child and man. He is simply waiting for the rain to stop. That ordinary detail makes the sudden flash feel even crueler. The poem stretches the fraction of a second into images like a butterfly's breadth and a flicker on the retina.

The speaker seems stunned and sorrowful, reflecting that a life is only a "flickering" in an infinite world. The final lines turn to the grieving family and a loss with "no reason." The mood is quiet, shocked, and heavy with the unfairness of it.

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