The Mood — Summary

he felt the inside of his head crack laden with steel strings collapsing on his face the sea of violence just behind his sterling silver brow beat the air now blue and thickening in the night

later his eyes rose from sleep and the air burst into orange flames he couldn't control himself raw and burnt with horrible demons that cooked his skin and devoured him

only the morning when he could feel the tremors and the sweat did he cover himself in a towel

mercy flowing out like sand his eyes ran all over trying to forget

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The poem follows a man through a terrible night and into the morning after. It begins with a sudden break: he feels his head "crack," weighed down by steel strings, while a "sea of violence" presses just behind his forehead. The air itself turns heavy and blue. Later, waking, he sees the air burst into orange flames he cannot control, and demons seem to cook and devour him. Judging by the imagery, this could be a nightmare, a breakdown, or a feverish episode; the poem never says which.

The mood is frightening and claustrophobic, with a feeling of being trapped inside his own body and mind. The morning brings no relief, only trembling, sweat, and the small act of wrapping himself in a towel, as if trying to hide. The ending is quietly sad: mercy drains away "like sand," and his eyes dart around, desperate to forget. What lingers is exhaustion and shame after the fear has passed.

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