Night Fears — Summary

Small-hours creak of wooden floors. Dead hearts.

Sounds suddenly come.

Are they leaves on the window or fingers tapping? Shatter of glass, paralysed fingers.

Overhead, something moves,

Listlessly rasping its feet.

Birds' feet have claws. They sound like claws.

If they were lighter, it might be a bird.

Lips dusted with fever hiss at the keyhole. Drifts of starlight cross the floor, Bending and supplicating.

The shadows gather - don't look at their eyes.

The curtains are pulled aside.

The moon vanishes.

The shadows soak over the room.

Their faces squint from the wallpaper.

Tap-tap-tap.

Ah!

Shooting my feet to the end of the bed They meet a toad, clammy with poison.

No. It is only a cold hot-water bottle.

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A person lies awake in the small hours, and every sound feels like a threat. The speaker keeps trying to explain the noises away: leaves or fingers on the window, a bird or something with claws overhead. Each explanation falls apart almost as soon as it's offered ("If they were lighter, it might be a bird"). Starlight, shadows and even the wallpaper seem to come alive, and the short, broken lines make the fear feel like held breath, with the warning "don't look at their eyes" adding to the dread.

The tension builds until the sudden "Ah!" when the speaker's feet touch something clammy at the end of the bed, which they take for a poisonous toad. Then comes the relief, and the joke: it's only a cold hot-water bottle. The mood shifts from creeping terror to a rueful, almost comic release, showing how an anxious imagination can turn something ordinary into a monster.

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