The Hands — Summary

lil hand wrapped around a bigger one leading and showing me the way he was proud of his lil son and he showed it in many different ways and didn't quit until it was done

his big hand wrapped around mine would teach me to pray and taught me to fish with a good line and all throughout the day I knew a dad I could call mine

off to school would I go reading writing all in a day come home to my dog and my dad to tell of my day he knew she must be special in her I told of her beauty and dreamed to someday hold her and nestle he would grin and say some day some day my son

days pass and it was known it would my hands would wrap around his I mustered all I could and proud I stood in his last breath I could hear him say his son had done him good

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Mark Maxey's "The Hands" follows a relationship between a son and his father, using the image of hands to mark each stage. At first, the child's small hand is held by a larger one that guides him. The father teaches him to pray and to fish, and the son feels lucky to have a dad he can truly call his own. Later, the boy comes home from school with stories about his day, and the father listens warmly, smiling and saying "some day my son."

The last stanza reverses the picture at the start. Now the son's hands wrap around his father's, and he stays strong beside him as he dies. The poem suggests the father's final words are a kind of blessing: his son has done him proud. The mood is tender and grateful, with a quiet sadness at the end. The simple, plain language fits the subject, since love here is shown through small, steady acts rather than grand speeches.

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