Long Time Coming — Summary

Mark MaxeyRomantic

Long time coming said by you as if we were on a path but to me it was an intersection

I'd prayed, hoped and waited for this you asked of my new interests and I could tell you cared I was awkward and so were you paths-parallel on some levels but on different planes as well struggling to find the niche which only brings more awkwardness

but I can say it was good to hear your voice and connect again to a distant remembering regurgitated words not yet digested embarrassing as it may but its all here on a plate... running over... spilling but we don't bring our awareness to the table

I can say... the partial lunch hour we shared on the phone was nice to converse again healing time may bring more... or not and that is line at least it was a chance to talk again

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Mark Maxey's poem is about a phone call between two people who have been out of touch. The other person calls it "long time coming," as if the two of them had been walking toward each other along a path. The speaker sees it differently: for them it was an intersection, a place where two separate routes happen to cross.

The speaker has hoped for this conversation, and they can tell the other person cares. Still, both of them are awkward, and the poem suggests their lives run alongside each other without quite meeting. The image of unspoken feelings "spilling" over a plate that nobody looks at captures how much is left unsaid.

The mood is quiet, hesitant, and cautiously hopeful. The speaker doesn't claim the call fixed anything. They settle for something smaller: it was nice to talk, healing may or may not follow, and at least they had the chance.

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