A Flat Farewell — Summary

The apartment houses around us have rendered me an apartness: no clues help me fill in kinship down, or across, their windows.

The woods are ruffling breastfeathers. A flickering fur of alder leaves touches the birches’ frieze lapping the yellow wall.

Our horizon’s trinkets are grey as pencil, in the sky’s whited-out bell where a round tung deafens the eye with a puff of air.

On to islands of silence in the watery roar drops of burnt voice fall from the wind.

Through our years a heathland of waste was heaped with gouged earth. Erasing the school’s red roof From sight; grazing

the cathedral tower. Reviewing the observatory; but still we can scan the badged belt beyond it where accessories deck the horizon.

Twice seven years from the seventh floor I have watched white ships glide over the trees: from the oratory of my apartment, the horizon that will commemorate me.

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The speaker lives in a high-rise and looks out at the world from a window, feeling cut off from the people in the buildings around him. He puns on "apartment" and "apartness" to show how close neighbours can still feel like strangers: no window offers a clue to connect with, as in a crossword.

Beyond the buildings, he turns to nature and sky. Alder leaves, birches, wind and a pale, washed-out sky are described with close, tactile images, so the natural world feels more alive than the human one. Meanwhile, the poem notes that building has gradually blocked parts of the view, such as the school roof, though the cathedral tower and distant horizon remain.

The last stanza gives the poem its weight. For fourteen years he has watched white ships glide past from the seventh floor, and he calls his flat an "oratory," a place of prayer. The mood is quiet, solitary and reflective, with loneliness softened by a settled, almost devotional attachment to this view.

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