Dialogue — Summary

Mike StoneContemplative

A small crack of lightening,

Distant thunder claps its hands

Like a foreign guest slow to understand

The anecdote's nuance in our tongue.

It's still raining heavy droplets

Under spare limbed trees and phone wires.

Smells of worm and snail eddy Invisible swirls of warmth From the dirt path where sunlight Sabers pierce overarching cloud.

In the continuing dialogue between earth and sky. She seems to say in a petulant voice, see!

Don’t you see how thirsty I was?

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Mike Stone's "Dialogue" watches a rainstorm and imagines it as a conversation between earth and sky. The poem begins with a small flash of lightning and thunder far off, which the speaker compares to a foreign guest who laughs politely at a joke without quite following it. It's a gentle, funny image that makes the storm feel more awkward than threatening.

As the rain keeps falling on bare trees and phone wires, the speaker notices smaller things: the smell of worms and snails, and warmth rising from the dirt path where sunlight cuts through the clouds. The speaker seems calm and attentive, enjoying the details rather than fearing the weather.

The ending gives the earth a voice. She sounds a little petulant, as if proving a point: look how thirsty I was. The mood is quiet, fresh and quietly playful, and the rain feels less like an event than a long-awaited answer.

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