Blood Web — Poem analysis

Q.R. QuasarContemplative

we are all webbed together by the salt water of the sea and we carry the ocean around in us in the tides of our blood pound

we are all blood-webbed to the sea and through the sea to each other our skein is one ocean both on land and in the sea

when we breathe, the ocean breathes we are the sea that walks (we have no roots like trees) we are the sea that swims

we are the blood web cast beyond the air our reach is blood-lined to the voids between...

but we can only live in the ocean so we carry the ocean around

in us in the tides of our blood pound

we are all blood-webbed to the sea our skein is one ocean we are all blood-webbed together by the salt water of the sea

we are all one ocean, one air, one void we are all blood-webbed together in the tree of mind

we are all blood-webbed together we are all one blood-web we are all one blood-web

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Each time the speaker of "Blood Web" says "we," the pronoun stretches a little further. It starts with people joined by "the salt water of the sea" and ends with "one ocean, one air, one void." The central idea is easy to state and harder to feel: living things are not separate creatures but one network, and the evidence is inside us, in our blood.

The poem rests on a double image. A web suggests spun silk or a cast net, and "skein," a coil of thread or yarn, adds the sense of many strands twisted into one. The opening stanza says only "webbed together." By the second, the word has become "blood-webbed," as if the poem needed a stanza to work out what the web is made of. Water turns into blood, and blood turns into thread. Blood really is salty, and the notion that our bodies hold a private sea is a familiar one, but the poem isn't doing chemistry. It uses the likeness as a bridge: if the sea is in me and in you, then "through the sea" we are joined "to each other."

The sound of the poem works the same way. It is free verse, with no regular metre and no fixed stanza length, but it leans hard on repetition. The refrain "in us / in the tides of our blood pound" is grammatically odd, since we would expect "the pounding tides of our blood." Putting "pound" last makes the line land like a heartbeat, and it also rhymes with "around," so the sentence closes on a thud. The refrain comes back after the midpoint, and the opening lines return near the end with "blood" added. The poem behaves like a tide, washing out and returning slightly changed.

The verbs matter too. "When we breathe, the ocean breathes" gives two subjects a single action. "We are the sea that walks" and "the sea that swims" turn the usual picture upside down. We are not land animals who happen to live near water but the sea itself, moving about in different forms. Then comes the quiet aside "(we have no roots like trees)", set in brackets like something murmured. It reads as a small claim of freedom, and also perhaps of loss.

That aside pays off at the end. After the poem has declared that we have no roots, it closes with "blood-webbed together in the tree / of mind." The line break leaves "tree" hanging for a beat before "of mind" explains it. The rootless creatures have a tree after all, one that grows in thought rather than soil. "Tree" also rhymes with "sea," which quietly ties the two central images together.

The most striking turn is in the middle. The web is "cast beyond the air," and its reach is "blood-lined to the voids between...", with the ellipsis trailing off into emptiness. Judging by the imagery, the poem is imagining life extending outward into space. Then it checks itself: "but we can only live in the ocean / so we carry the ocean around." Freedom and dependence turn out to be one fact. We can go anywhere only by taking the sea with us, and the whole poem is built on that thought.

The ending drops figures of speech altogether. "We are all one blood-web" is repeated twice, flat and declarative, like a chant. The vocabulary is small and elemental: sea, ocean, blood, air, void, tree. The repetition makes the words feel less like metaphors and more like facts.

The poem's significance lies in how many boundaries it dissolves in so few lines: land and sea, one person and another, body and environment, matter and mind. A reader might find the tone earnest, even insistent, but that insistence is part of its method. It argues by rhythm and echo as much as by statement, until the claim of oneness has been felt in the pulse of the lines before it is stated outright. For a student, it shows how a poem can turn something we might know as a science fact, that blood is salty, into a way of seeing ourselves as part of something larger.

Read also

More by Q.R. Quasar

All poems