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Dave BontaContemplative

night forest restless with autumn and insect chants

the sound of distant drums from band practice

overhead the dark canopy glittering with stars

a train horn’s one-of-a-kind chord returns me to myself

under an old mother oak wind paging through the leaves

before moonrise in a woods as dark as a womb

look what the moon has done with borrowed light

recycled from that workhorse with its quotidian round

a light that savors instead of swallowing whole

oh little white pill what visions will you precipitate

so this tendril of wakefulness can corkscrew inward

a reverse heliotropism toward whatever resists illumination

the unexamined life like volcanic glass

lightweight and porous a stone that floats

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Dave Bonta's poem moves through two linked moments of night. In the first part, the speaker is outdoors in a forest, taking in small sounds and sights: insects, far-off drums from band practice, stars through the branches, and a train horn that, in the speaker's words, "returns me to myself." The woods feel calm but alive, and the closing image of darkness "as dark as a womb" suggests comfort as much as mystery.

The second part turns inward. The moon's "borrowed light" gives way to a "little white pill," which the poem suggests is a sleep aid, though it never says so outright. The speaker seems to wait for visions while a thread of wakefulness curls inward, toward whatever "resists illumination." The final image, a stone that floats, compares the unexamined life to something light and full of holes. The mood is quiet, curious, and a little restless, caught between the peace of nature and the pull of the mind's hidden corners.

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