In the Middle of Nowhere — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

1

revisiting the vista i use for my laptop’s home screen

i meet the gaze of a hawk hanging in the wind

right where i’m used to seeing the icons for my apps

the rocks are cold my thermos mug keeps burbling

2

the muffled knocks of a pileated woodpecker

opening a new door into an oak

shadows grow darker as the clouds thin out

the mountain hisses in the north wind

i start thinking what if time never passes

and instead it is us who pass through it

a walker’s thoughts only make sense on foot

3

200 years and a trail may sink into the ground

i’m at eye level with roots now

the crisp air smells piney and fungal

leaves are revealing their true faces

acorns thud down at odd moments

like the steps of someone lost in contemplation

4

feet propped up on my front porch railing

lean against one another like two old drunks

my thoughts retreat behind the parentheses of my ears

a Carolina wren chants his teakettle song

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The speaker is out hiking, and the poem opens with a nice twist: the view in front of him is the same one he uses as his laptop's wallpaper. A hawk hangs in the air where his app icons usually sit, so the real world seems to replace the digital one. From there the poem slows down and pays attention to small things: a woodpecker knocking, a hissing wind, roots at eye level, acorns thudding to the ground.

The mood is quiet, curious and contented. The speaker drifts into an idea, that time may not pass at all and that we are the ones moving through it, then admits that such thoughts "make sense on foot." In the last section he is back on his porch with his feet up, leaning together "like two old drunks," a funny, affectionate image. The poem ends on a wren's song, as if the speaker's mind has gone still enough to just listen.

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