Materialist — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I eat snow and count all the ways to get money

I am giving myself wholly up to matter

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Four short lines are enough for Dave Bonta's "Materialist" to ask an awkward question: what does it mean to live entirely in the physical world, and is that a choice or a condition? The title arrives first and sets a trap. We expect a poem about greed, about someone who wants things. What we get is stranger and more bodily.

The first stanza gives two actions in one breath: "I eat snow and count / all the ways to get money." There is no comma and no pause between the verbs, so the mouth and the mind seem to be busy at once. Snow is matter at its most basic, cold and free and almost nothing. It fills the mouth without feeding anyone. Set beside it, money is the great abstraction, a number standing in for things. The speaker handles both in the same flat tone. Small word choices add to the unease. "All the ways" suggests an exhaustive, perhaps anxious inventory, as though the speaker is running out of options. "Get" is blunter than "earn" and says nothing about whether the methods are honest. Judging by the imagery, the scene could be hunger, hardship or simple restlessness, and the poem never says which.

The second stanza turns from action to declaration: "I am giving myself / wholly up to matter." The phrase "giving up" can mean surrender, as in defeat, and "giving myself" sounds like devotion, the language of vows. Here is a quiet pun: "wholly" sounds exactly like "holy," so the vocabulary of religious self-sacrifice gets pointed at the physical world instead of the spiritual one. The line break matters too. After "myself" the sentence could stop on a complete, almost tender gift, and only then does "up to matter" say what the gift is for. The last word does double duty as well. Matter is the stuff the world is made of, but it is also what matters, and the poem ends where those senses meet. The speaker has decided that the physical is all that counts, or perhaps has no choice but to treat it that way.

The construction is spare. There is no rhyme, no punctuation, and no capital except the two "I"s that open each stanza, so the poem reads like speech with the ornaments stripped off. The grammar is parallel: each stanza begins with "I" and a present-tense verb, but the first stays with concrete acts (eating, counting) while the second climbs to a statement of principle. The sound ties them together more subtly than rhyme would. "Money," "myself" and "matter" all start with the same soft hum of an m, and both stanzas end on a two-syllable word that falls away on an unstressed syllable. "Money" and "matter" are not rhymes, but they echo each other closely enough that the practical worry of the first stanza and the grand vow of the second begin to sound like the same thing.

The tone is hard to pin down, and that is much of the poem's interest. The elevated phrasing of "giving myself wholly up" sits oddly beside a person eating snow, and that gap can be read as dry comedy, as if the speaker were dignifying a meagre situation with a philosophy. It can just as easily be read as bleak, a person who has been reduced to the body and to arithmetic. The poem does not choose for us.

That refusal is where its significance lies. In so few words, "Materialist" shows how one label can mean both a moral failing (loving money) and a view of the world (believing only in matter), and it lets a single speaker embody both without comment. It does not lecture about consumerism or poverty. It stays at the level of the mouth, the cold and the counting, and trusts the final pun to leave the reader wondering which kind of materialist this is, and whether the difference is as large as we assume.

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