Forestry — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

from timber I learn a thin plain thought

which I may remember if ever it should come forth

in a true place to stand still and do nothing

and I have a little wine like rain for supper

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A title like "Forestry" promises work: felling, planting, measuring, managing. Dave Bonta's poem delivers the opposite. The speaker says he learns from timber "a thin plain thought," and when the thought arrives it turns out to be "to stand still and do nothing." The poem then ends on an evening scene, "a little wine / like rain for supper." Its central idea is that stillness is a form of knowledge, and that trees, which spend their lives standing in place and taking in weather, are good teachers of it.

What stands out is how unsure the speaker is of his own lesson. He does not announce wisdom. He says the thought is something "I may remember / if ever it should come forth." Each hedge, "may," "if ever," "should," makes the thought feel less like a rule and more like a seedling that might or might not surface. "Come forth" also suggests sprouting or emerging, and it echoes the "fo" of the title. The next phrase, "in a true place," can be read two ways. It may describe where the thought comes forth, or where one can stand still. The lack of punctuation lets both readings hold at once. Notice, too, that the place is "true," not "quiet" or "beautiful." Judging by the word choice, the speaker values honesty and rightness of place over scenery.

The poem has no capital letters and no punctuation, and it follows no obvious rhyme scheme, yet sound ties it together. "Thin plain thought" is three stressed words in a row, so the line slows as if someone had eased off a pedal. The *th* sound returns in "forth" and "nothing." The most satisfying link is "plain" in the second line and "rain" in the last. Seven lines apart, they form a true rhyme, so the opening thought and the closing image click together like a latch. A quieter echo joins "timber" in line one to "remember" in line three, which binds the source of the lesson to the act of keeping it.

The structure is just as plain: four couplets, short lines, nearly all one- and two-syllable words. Because there is no punctuation, readers choose where to breathe, and that makes the reading itself unhurried. The line "to stand still and do nothing" does what it says. "Stand still" is two heavy beats that stop the movement, and the line ends on "nothing," a word that refuses to be impressive. Then the small word "and" carries us from the lesson to supper, treating the profound and the domestic as equals. No one stops to admire the insight. They simply go on to eat.

The imagery rewards a closer look. "Timber" is a word from the world of use, wood that is measured and cut, so it is gently ironic that the lesson drawn from it is one of uselessness. The final simile gives the poem its warmth. Wine "like rain" is modest and unforced, and it joins a human pleasure to the weather that feeds a forest. By drinking a little wine as trees drink rain, the speaker seems to take his lesson in at once. The supper is also oddly bare, a drink instead of a meal, which fits the poem's preference for less.

That preference explains why the poem is worth reading. Its small adjectives, "thin," "plain," "little," form a vocabulary of smallness, and the poem's real subject is how much a small thing can hold. In a culture that treats busyness as a virtue, it suggests, quietly and without lecturing, that standing still is a skill that has to be learned, and that some lessons are too thin to shout. The poem practices what it teaches: eight lines, no waste, nothing forced. A reader who finishes it has been handed that one plain thought, and may remember it.

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