Tract — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

in the contract for a field all that lives here is without any reckoning

poor as the shale and the business of visions

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Four lines, no punctuation, no capital letters, and a whole argument about what we count and what we don't. Dave Bonta's "Tract" begins inside a legal document: "in the contract for a field." A contract deals in boundaries, acreage and price. The poem's turn comes in the second line, where it says that "all that lives here is without any reckoning." The living things on the land, the creatures and plants and whatever else stirs there, don't appear in the sum. The paperwork covers the ground and misses everything alive on it.

The title carries a good deal of the poem's weight. A "tract" is a stretch of land, which fits the field. It is also a short religious pamphlet, which anticipates the word "visions" at the end. And the word is hidden in plain sight inside "contract," the first noun we meet. The poem itself never says so, but the overlap is hard to miss: the land deal and the sermon turn out to be built from the same syllable. Whether Bonta intended every one of these meanings, the poem gives us room to hear them all.

"Reckoning" is the most interesting word in the poem because it pulls two ways. In its everyday sense it means counting or calculating, so the living things are simply not tallied. But it also carries the older sense of an accounting at the end, as in a "day of reckoning." Read that way, the line suggests that life on the field escapes judgment as well as arithmetic. It sits outside both the ledger and the verdict. The poem doesn't choose between these meanings, and that openness is part of its quiet force.

The second stanza turns from the contract to the ground itself: "poor as the shale." Shale is a rock that splits into thin layers, and judging by the image it suggests thin, unprofitable land, the kind a buyer wouldn't boast about. The grammar is slippery, though. We can't tell whether "poor" describes the soil, the living things, or the whole field, and the missing punctuation lets all three readings stand. Shale's thin, stacked layers may also remind us of pages, which would quietly link the rock to the pamphlet in the title. That is an inference, but the poem's wordplay makes it a tempting one.

Then comes the odd, tilted final line: "and the business of visions." "Business" brings us back to the language of contracts and commerce, but it is attached to something that can't be bought or measured. It can be read as a shrug, as if visions were just another trade with its own small profits. It can also be read as a vocation, a serious calling. After "poor," there may be an echo of the old religious idea that poverty and vision go together, though the poem only hints at this. Because the line ends without a full stop, it feels unfinished, as though the field's true value is something the poem can only point toward.

The rhythm supports this. The first line is a plain seven syllables, almost conversational. The second stretches to about a dozen, and its long run through "without any reckoning" feels like a list that keeps going because nothing stops it. Then the poem tightens to the four-syllable "poor as the shale," which lands like a stone, before loosening again in the last line. There is no rhyme, only scattered echoes: the soft sibilants of "shale," "business" and "visions," and the short *i* of "lives," "business" and "visions," which links the living to the visionary. The absence of capitals and punctuation keeps everything level, so that no word, not even "visions," is allowed to sound grander than "field."

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it does with so little. It doesn't lecture about ownership or ecology. It shows a document that can describe a place without noticing what lives there, then sets beside it a different kind of attention, one that values what no contract could list. In a few lines it leaves us asking what else we have failed to count.

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