Settler — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

I sat all morning and the land sat there till night and my very eyes began to sit

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Five short lines, and almost nothing happens in them. A person sits through a morning, the land sits too, night arrives, and the person's eyes "began to sit." Yet the poem is built to make that small event feel complete, even a little startling. Its subject is the slow process by which attention turns into belonging, and its central idea is hidden in the title. A settler is usually someone who acts on a place by clearing it, building on it, and claiming it. Dave Bonta's settler does the opposite and settles by doing nothing at all.

The whole poem turns on one verb. "Sat" appears twice and "sit" once, and the repetition makes a quiet joke of the first two lines. "I sat all morning / and the land sat there": land cannot sit, since it is already the thing everything else sits on. By giving it the speaker's verb, the poem puts the two on equal terms, as if they were waiting each other out. Then comes the odd, tender last move. The speaker's "very eyes" begin to sit, and the organs of restless looking, which normally dart and scan, go still. The eyes stop gathering the landscape and start to resemble it. The poem never says the speaker became part of the place, but that is what the final line implies.

The title adds a second layer. "Settle" and "sit" are close relatives, and a settler is, in a sense, someone who takes a seat. The word also carries colonial echoes of homesteaders and claimed ground. Set against that, a man who merely sits looks almost comic, and also humble. Nothing is conquered or named, and ownership is replaced by endurance. The land is not acted upon at all. It is accompanied, and by the end the accompaniment has changed the person doing it.

The poem's construction supports this. Counting syllables, the lines run roughly five, five, two, five, four. The two pairs of near-matching lines give a steady, almost sedentary rhythm, like someone breathing evenly. Then "till night" drops to two syllables and one strong beat. It is the shortest line, and it is where the hours vanish. The poem refuses to describe the afternoon, so the day simply collapses, as it does when we stare at something for too long. The last line, "began to sit," is also short and ends on the clipped "it," so the poem stops rather than concludes. The tense matters too. Everything before it is firmly in the past, but "began to sit" points forward into a process that has not finished. We are left inside the stillness, not looking back at it.

There is no rhyme, and the poem does not need any. The sound work is quieter, a recurring "s" (sat, sat, sit) with a short, flat vowel that seems to press down like a weight. "Land sat there" is nearly all stressed syllables in a row, and reading it aloud you can feel the words thud into place. Compare that with "my very eyes," which is softer and slightly odd. "Very" is an ordinary intensifier, but here it works almost like a flinch of surprise: even my eyes, the part of me I thought was doing the watching.

What the poem leaves out is as telling as what it includes. There are no trees, hills, rivers or weather, and "the land" is as generic as a word can be. Readers are free to supply their own landscape, which makes the poem feel less like a description of one place than a recipe for any place. The only image is the posture itself. That is a risk, since a poem about stillness could easily go dull, but the compression and the deadpan humor keep it alive.

The poem is significant because it quietly turns a loaded word upside down. It suggests that to live in a place may begin with sitting long enough that your seeing stops being a form of taking. In five lines it manages to be funny, restful and a little unsettling, since the speaker ends up less in command of his eyes than they are in command of him.

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