Farmer — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

to raise a rose is to grant salt to a fish I had no great pleasure in it

but I find the fields all in dirt like livable prayers

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker, a farmer, begins with a strange comparison: raising a rose is like giving salt to a fish. A fish already lives in salt water, so the gift is pointless. The image suggests that making something beautiful and decorative feels unnecessary, even a little absurd, to someone who works the land. The speaker admits plainly, "I had no great pleasure in it."

The second stanza turns. The word "but" shifts the feeling from indifference to quiet appreciation. What the speaker does value is the fields, bare and "all in dirt." Calling them "livable prayers" is the poem's richest moment. A prayer is usually words or a wish, but here it is something you can actually live inside and work within. The poem seems to say that real devotion lies in ordinary, useful ground rather than in showy flowers.

The mood is spare, humble, and calm. The speaker doesn't boast or preach, and the short lines let the thought settle slowly.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Plea bargain

I hear half a beat of drum to serve time have half a hope in the meantime praise God
DreamyDave Bonta

Cibola 3

I awake in the dark and shake free of sheets & blankets, of down-filled quilt. The rituals of waking– the long, hot shower, the coffee–give
ContemplativeDave Bonta

In good light

On a maple’s pale bark, a zigzag ladder—old tooth-marks from a wandering snail? Green islands of moss