Undercover — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

a moth at the fire begins to see

I sit with my bones unread like impossible letters

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Seventeen words, no punctuation, no capital letters except the lonely "I": Dave Bonta's "Undercover" is small enough to take in at a glance, yet it leaves the feeling of having been quietly turned inside out.

The first couplet gives us an image we think we know. A moth at a fire is one of the oldest pictures of doomed attraction, so the sentence seems to be heading toward singed wings. Instead the poem says the moth "begins to see." The verb matters. Sight here is a process that has only just started, and "see" has no object, so we never learn what is seen. It might be the plain fact of light, or it might be understanding, the sudden clarity that comes from getting too close to something dangerous. The poem also never says whether the moth survives its new vision.

Then the poem changes subject, and with it the grammar of its world. The animal gives way to a person, "I sit," and the moth's restless circling gives way to stillness. Seeing gives way to reading, which is a slower and more deliberate kind of sight. The speaker's bones are "unread," as if the skeleton, the hardest and most hidden part of a body, were a text that has been in the speaker's possession all along and has never been opened. The simile "like impossible letters" deepens the strangeness. "Letters" can mean the characters of an alphabet or messages sent from one person to another, and "impossible" can mean undecipherable, unsendable, or simply not believable. Notice that the simile is vaguer than the thing it describes. Bones are solid and you can picture them, but "impossible letters" are not something you can picture at all, so the comparison makes the body more mysterious instead of explaining it.

The title adds another layer, and it is a word the poem never uses. Bones are literally under the cover of skin, the way a text sits under the cover of a book. "Undercover" also suggests hiding, sheltering, even spying, so the speaker seems to be a kind of double agent who lives inside a message and cannot read it. Moths are often drab and well camouflaged, which makes a moth "undercover" too, until the fire shows it up. The flame in this poem exposes things, and we are left to wonder what it might do to the speaker.

The poem's construction is plain, and that is part of its effect. Two couplets, no rhyme, no end punctuation. The first is quick: "a moth at the fire" has barely five syllables, and "begins to see" is shorter still. The second couplet is longer and heavier, and the five-syllable "impossible" slows the line down, the way a word slows you when you are sounding it out and unsure of it. The soft, hissing sounds of "sit," "see," "impossible" and "letters" give the poem a hushed, almost whispered quality. "Unread" ends on a flat, blunt syllable, and a listener might even hear in it a faint echo of "red," the colour of the fire the poem never mentions again.

That absence is the poem's most interesting gap. The second couplet does not say where the speaker is sitting, but placed beside the first it invites us to imagine the speaker at the same fire, watching the moth. That is an inference, not something the text states. If it is right, the two figures become a pair. The moth takes the risk of approaching the light and begins to see. The human stays safely seated, with plenty of light and no reading done.

The poem is worth reading because it holds a paradox in so little space. We carry the deepest evidence of ourselves, the frame that holds us up, and we cannot read it. The poem does not resolve this or tell us what to feel. It sets a small, bold creature next to a still, careful one and lets the reader decide which is better off. What the poem leaves out, such as the object of the moth's sight, the link between the couplets and the fire's second appearance, does as much work as the seventeen words it keeps.

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