Broke — Poem analysis

Dave BontaAnxious

nights without money I carry a purse full of impossible things

undressing myself in the dark I lie like a Dutch oven in the hands of rust

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The title does a lot of quiet work. "Broke" is the everyday word for having no money, but it also means smashed, out of order, unable to function. Dave Bonta's six-line poem plays on both senses. It shows what a night feels like when there is nothing in your pocket, and it suggests that poverty is not only a shortage of cash but a slow wearing-down of the person who lives with it.

The first stanza starts with a time, not a place or a person: "nights without money." The plural matters. This is a repeated condition, not a single bad evening. Then comes the surprise. The speaker carries "a purse full / of impossible things." A purse exists to hold money, so the image is an ironic one. The purse is not empty, which would be the obvious joke, but crowded with whatever the speaker cannot have or cannot do. The poem never lists these things, and that restraint is its strength. Readers can fill the purse with their own wants, from unpaid bills to dreams that have been put off. The line break helps. "I carry a purse full" pauses on *full*, so for a beat the purse seems abundant, and only then does "of impossible things" take that fullness away. The word "carry" suggests that desire here is a weight rather than a comfort.

In the second stanza the poem moves from the mind to the body. "Undressing myself in the dark" is a lonely action. Nobody undresses the speaker, and the dark offers no audience and perhaps no light to spare, though that is an inference rather than something the poem says. Then comes the simile that holds the poem together: "I lie like a Dutch oven / in the hands of rust." A Dutch oven is a heavy cast-iron pot for slow cooking, an object meant for warmth and meals and company. Here it lies unused, and iron left unused is what rust feeds on. Several meanings meet in the picture. The speaker is dark, heavy and round-shouldered in the bed, like the pot. The pot is a vessel, like the purse, but a cooking vessel with no food in it, so hunger is implied without being named. "Lie" can also mean to tell a falsehood, and that faint pun hints that the speaker is lying to himself or herself about being fine.

"In the hands of rust" turns decay into a person. Rust has hands, and it is patient and in no hurry. The phrase also echoes the hand that carried the purse and the hands that undressed the speaker. Over the course of the poem, control passes from the speaker's hands to the hands of corrosion. The speaker goes from carrying to lying down, and from doing to being done to.

The poem's sound and shape support this slide. There is no rhyme and no regular meter. The lines are short, with no punctuation and no capitals, which gives the voice a hushed, late-night quality. The first stanza's lines run five, five and six syllables, and the second opens with a longer, sagging line of eight before ending on the clipped "in the hands of rust." The last word is a single heavy syllable that lands like a lid. There are quiet sound-links too: the d's of "undressing," "dark" and "Dutch" give the second stanza a dull, thudding undertone, and "purse" and "rust" share an r-and-s skeleton, so the first stanza's container and the last stanza's decay seem to be related words.

What makes the poem worth reading is how little it explains. It does not mention rent, hunger or debt, and it does not ask for pity. It offers two household objects, a purse and a pot, and trusts them to carry the feeling. It is also strangely funny in its dryness, because comparing yourself to cookware is a wry way to talk about despair. That mix of humor and bleakness feels honest. Being broke, the poem suggests, is lived mostly in the quiet hours when there is nothing left to do but undress, lie down and listen to the slow work of rust.

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