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ice sitting on ice my heart my car
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Thursday 17 January 1667.
Dave Bonta
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ice sitting on ice my heart my car
Erasure poem derived from The Diary of Samuel Pepys, Thursday 17 January 1667.
Three lines, a handful of words, and almost everything is left for the reader to feel. The poem sets up a comparison: ice sitting on ice, then "my heart" and "my car." The structure suggests the heart and the car are the two layers, one frozen thing resting on another.
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