Impoverished — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

broke I go into my pocketbook for pain and consequences

writing this I hold the whole hole to be a quiet nest

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Money is tight, and the speaker reaches into a pocketbook expecting to find cash. What comes out instead is "pain and consequences." The empty wallet isn't just a lack of coins; it holds the weight of every choice that led to this moment. The word "broke" sits alone at the start, blunt and a little funny, like a shrug.

Then the poem turns. While writing, the speaker looks at the "whole hole" and sees "a quiet nest." The pun on "whole" and "hole" is playful, and it flips the meaning: emptiness becomes a place to settle into. Poverty is still there, but writing about it makes it feel sheltering rather than shameful.

The mood is wry, calm, and quietly resilient. The speaker doesn't pretend the loss isn't real. Judging by the poem's turn, though, the act of writing seems to give the emptiness a kind of warmth, a small, hushed refuge.

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