Skeptic — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

day like a hole for light I have not seen

an orange undressed into four and twenty pieces

by you our neighbors you our hopes of a hereafter

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The title sets the tone: the speaker is a skeptic, someone who doesn't take comfort on trust. The poem opens with an odd, dark image of a day as "a hole for light" that the speaker has "not seen." Daylight seems like an opening or gap rather than something warm, and the speaker hasn't yet witnessed it properly.

Then comes a small, ordinary scene: an orange peeled and divided into "four and twenty pieces." The precise number sounds almost like a nursery rhyme, which gives the moment a strange, playful edge. The speaker addresses "you," neighbors who are also "our hopes of a hereafter." That line is the heart of the poem. Hope for an afterlife seems to rest on everyday people doing everyday things, like sharing fruit.

The mood is quiet, wry, and a little tender. The speaker doubts big promises, yet the poem suggests that small human gestures might be the closest thing to them.

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