Timekeeper — Summary

weary clock within me enough go away

where I was promised school they taught me sleep

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The speaker is worn out by the "clock within me," an inner sense of time that ticks on whether they want it to or not. The short, blunt lines "enough / go away" sound like someone who has run out of patience and simply wants quiet. It reads almost like a plea to their own body or mind.

The second stanza shifts to a quiet complaint. The speaker was "promised school," which suggests an expectation of learning, growth, or purpose. What they got instead was a lesson in sleep. That could mean literal exhaustion, or it could hint at numbness, a life where being awake never quite happened. The poem doesn't spell it out, so the reader has to decide.

The mood is tired, dry, and a little wry. There is frustration, but it is muted rather than angry, as if even complaining takes effort. The sparseness of the words mirrors that fatigue: the poem says just enough and then stops.

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