Over the hill — Summary

my body is a wound an accident a rusted tool

no sober man would recommend it

saying nest here and come to bed entering my journal

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The speaker begins with a harsh self-portrait: the body is a wound, an accident, a rusted tool. Each image suggests something damaged, unplanned, or worn past usefulness. The second stanza pushes this further. No sensible person, the speaker says, would recommend this body, as if it were a bad purchase or a risky bet.

Then the poem turns. The last stanza is harder to pin down, but it seems to bring in another voice or a memory of one: "nest here / and come to bed." These are warm, inviting phrases, a sharp contrast with the bleak opening. The speaker records them in a journal, so the invitation may be something imagined, remembered, or hoped for, and the poem doesn't say which.

The mood is rueful and self-deprecating, but not simply despairing. The speaker sounds convinced of their own unworthiness, yet tenderness still slips in. The poem leaves us wondering whether that kindness can soften the self-judgment, or whether it only makes the harshness stand out more.

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