Inheritance — Summary

last dream before waking

My grandfather never died; he simply lost all animation. We carry him from house to car to house, & his pale thin figure is able to hold any pose indefinitely.

He doesn’t eat, so he never goes to the bathroom — a relief for everyone. Some of us do put words in his mouth: I know what Pop-pop would say, we say, & maybe we do, but his expression never changes.

He’s sitting right there when the four siblings meet to divide the estate. He was always good at not hearing things, though, & this morning is no exception. The room turns to coal around him. We are shining our headlamps at the shale ceiling & its yellow shapes of ferns. We are listening for canaries.

After a lifetime in the oil industry, it must seem strange to return to the hard coal country of his childhood, but at least Pop-pop doesn’t need a light. This is an outcome he’d recognize — one he set aside after his famous talk with God. I hear his nose drip behind me like the stalactite it was always trying to become. Someone says, Black as the ace of spades! with a nervous laugh, & it sounds just like him.

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Dave Bonta's poem reads like a dream, and its subtitle says as much: it comes from the "last dream before waking." In it, a grandfather has never officially died but has simply stopped moving. The family carries him from house to car and back again, a pale figure who can hold any pose. They speak for him, claiming to know what "Pop-pop would say," though his face never changes. The tone is deadpan and oddly practical, even funny, as when his not eating becomes "a relief for everyone."

The mood shifts when the siblings gather to divide the estate. The room turns to coal, and they wear headlamps and listen for canaries, as miners do. The speaker seems to be sliding into the old man's past, and perhaps toward his fate. The poem suggests that an inheritance is more than money. It is a way of living on through other people's voices, and the final nervous laugh, which sounds just like him, shows how he still haunts them.

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